Children’s fiction excerpt (editing/proofreading)

阿蓝奶奶是被 “精灵旅行社” 广告招牌上的 “精灵” 两个字吸引着跨进店铺的。阿蓝奶奶只是看了一眼这个地方,就有种似曾相识的感觉。

“精灵旅行社欢迎您的光临!我是社长阿光。” 一个阳光帅气的小伙子从迎宾的柜台后面走出来。她的身上系着一条藏青色的帆布围裙,围裙上面画着一只黑白色的胖猫咪。他微笑着,露出两排白白的牙齿,用一种令人舒适的音量和语气,招呼着阿蓝奶奶。

Granny Azure was drawn to set foot inside the Elf Travel Agency by the word “Elf” on the store’s advertisement sign. With just a glance at the travel agency, she had a sense of déjà vu.

“Welcome to Elf Travel Agency! My name is Lucas, the travel agency’s president.” A handsome young man with a sunny disposition emerged from behind the reception counter. He wore a navy-blue canvas apron upon which a black and white chubby cat was painted. He gave a small smile, revealing two rows of white teeth, and, using a comforting volume and tone, greeted Granny Azure.